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My first poem by !ninja-doragon:iconninja-doragon:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Experimental > Other


My heart is breaking
why do I feel this way
my head is aching
please, just go away

I hate the day
when I met you
so please stay away
so I can forget you

There will be a night
when you're not here
It's such a fright
you were my only knight

Now that you're not here
I am free at last
there's nothing to fear
now you're finally in my past
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Author's Comments

My first poem, so don't judge me!
I know it sucks. lol

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=Mobis-New-Nest Jun 19, 2009, 6:21:01 PM
Impressive Cyrena for your first poem. Though it does lack a bit of rhyming your doing pretty good so far.

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I'm fearless. Now hear this. I'm earless. And I'm peer-less.
That means I'm eyeless. Which means I'm tearless. Which means my iris resides where my ears is. Which means I'm blinded. But I'mma find it I can feel it's nearness.
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!ninja-doragon Jun 19, 2009, 6:24:42 PM
Ya thanks! I suck at that rhyming bit, my sister Is better at poems, though she does not write any vary often.
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~Zero-R-Seven Jun 19, 2009, 6:25:22 PM
Great poem Sis!!!!

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:iconninja-doragon:'s sister

RAWR!!!
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~Zero-R-Seven Jun 19, 2009, 6:27:41 PM
No problem! ARG!! Mt computer's being stupid!!! It won't let me upload!!!

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:iconninja-doragon:'s sister

RAWR!!!
:iconninja-doragon:
!ninja-doragon Jun 19, 2009, 6:28:13 PM
Aww -hugs- I'll come up and fix it k?
:iconzero-r-seven:
~Zero-R-Seven Jun 19, 2009, 6:29:08 PM
Yaaay!!!!!!! Thankyou! you can has some chips if ya want too, I've been hording stuff. LOL

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:iconninja-doragon:'s sister

RAWR!!!
:iconninja-doragon:
!ninja-doragon Jun 19, 2009, 6:29:50 PM
Sweet!!! I'll be up in a sec, just gonna log off first!
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=Mobis-New-Nest Jun 19, 2009, 6:30:33 PM
Give it time I'm sure you can build on it.

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I'm fearless. Now hear this. I'm earless. And I'm peer-less.
That means I'm eyeless. Which means I'm tearless. Which means my iris resides where my ears is. Which means I'm blinded. But I'mma find it I can feel it's nearness.
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